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上城基础雅思培训学校2025年6月5雅思大作文题目
雅思大作文示范写作 | 家庭影响 or 外界影响更大？
A family has a great influence on children’s development, but the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part in children’s life. Do you agree or disagree?
范文及解析
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（交代背景）The growth of a child is affected by numerous factors. （复述题目）Some feel a family is of great importance to children, while others argue that influences from outside the home play a larger role in shaping them. （作者立场）In my view, it is a child’s family that has a more significant impact on how the child develops.
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（作者理由）Children learn most of their habits and behaviors from those with whom they spend the most time during early childhood, i.e. their family members. Parents are the ones raising their children, after all, and it is during children’s formative years that their brains encode vital socialization skills and other interactive attitudes. （举例）This is exemplified by the high rate of criminality among children who grew up in broken homes. When parents are neglectful or abusive, children learn these habits and have high tendencies to repeat such behaviors themselves. （对比）On the opposite end of the spectrum, parents who teach constructive habits such as responsibility and independence to their children most often produce competent and upstanding citizens who know better than(不至于) to follow the crowd. Such children do not require the approval of others for validation（确认；证实）, and thus are not affected by outside influences as much.
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（让步）Admittedly, there are situations in which influences outside the home have a greater effect on a child’s development than families do. As mentioned above, when parents are neglectful their children will instinctively seek out role models whom they can emulate（努力赶上）. This frequently leads to them “falling in with a bad crowd” or being peer pressured into activities or lifestyles which are not healthy. For instance, drug abusers often started because their parents were not around to supervise them or educate them, and thus as children they spent time with similar children to whom they could relate. As the adage goes, “when the blind lead the blind, everyone falls in the ditch.” （转折）Yet, even in this case, it is ultimately the influence of the family, or lack thereof that has the greatest effect on how a child develops: whether for good or ill, it all stems from one’s home life.
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（复述立场）All in all, I believe that children develop along the path that a family leads them to. （总结论点）Good homes and parents will plan a clear path easy to follow, whereas a neglectful or abusive family may cause children to be led astray by outside influences. With good parenting, no amount of peer pressure or other non-home factors can have much of an effect on a child.
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杭州雅思培训，杭州雅思培训班，杭州学雅思哪家强，杭州新航道雅思培训励志语录：落日无边江不尽，此身此日更须忙。——陈师道。虽然说出流程图的概率不算特别大，但中了的同学五味杂陈，没中的同学提心吊胆。流程图很容易被写出来，但是得分不高。今天新航道小编就给大家介绍下雅思小作文——流程图“三部曲”，帮助同学们灵活运用被动语态，提取核心步骤动词，优化步骤的衔接手段，增加语言丰富性，适度联想，学会“适度”增补图形中的语义。
按照流程图“三部曲”的要求，同学们需要在每个步骤中找出三个问题的答案：
1.这个步骤用什么动词？
2.步骤中涉及到的材料、工具、地点和其他附加条件（如时间、温度、长度等）分别是什么？
3.步骤完成后状态发生了什么变化？
雅思写作 | 三步带你搞定流程图
接下来我们利用流程图“三部曲”的方法，来分析一下《剑桥雅思真题8》Test 3小作文：
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
什么是“流程图”呢？它需要我们按照图形所示，分步骤进行示意性展现，这样的流程就叫“流程图”。
它要求各步骤之间不仅有时间先后的关系，还要关注逻辑上的连贯性。
因此，我们在写作时需要确定时间先后，理清楚各步骤之间的逻辑关系。
从图像中，我们可以得出个流程图大致可以分为五个步骤：粉碎，混合，加热，再研磨，打包。
根据流程图“三部曲”的方法，我们可以得出以下表格：
再将“三部曲”的答案，利用逻辑衔接词、从句过渡，并添加上修饰性成分，如介词短语，不定式，我们可以得出整个段落：
To produce cement, the raw materials, limestone and clay are crushed into powder and then mixed before being heated in a rotating equipment with a heater at the bottom. The heated mixture is ground into even smaller particles ready to be bagged.
第二个流程图，材料虽然复杂，但是流程相对单一。依照流程图“三部曲”的步骤，我们可以得出第二个正文段落:
In order to make concrete which is the major material for building purposes, a mixture consisting of cement, water, sand and gravel, a kind of small stones, is needed. Gravel and sand are the two major materials, representing 50% and 25% of the raw substances, while the ratios of cement and water are relatively low (15% and 10% respectively).
These materials are mixed and rotated in a concrete mixer until the concrete is produced.
以上是新航道小编给大家带来的雅思流程图“三部曲”，希望能够对大家有所帮助。同学们认真复习，积极备考，祝大家早日取得优异的成绩。杭州学雅思，杭州雅思培训班，杭州专业雅思培训经典格言：杭州雅思培训，存平等心，行方便事，则天下无事。怀慈悲心，做慈悲事，则心中太平。上城基础雅思培训学校。
