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8月7日雅思大作文示范写作 | 孩子犯错的自由，范文及解析
Introduction
For children’s upbringing, some reckon that adults, especially parents, should avoid them from making mistakes, while I tend to harbour the view that teenagers should not be totally shackled.
【解析】教育类大话题：孩子是否有自由犯错？在一定限制条件之下，允许孩子试错，只要不走极端即可，如青少年犯罪。法律道德是基本底线。
8月7日雅思大作文| 孩子犯错的自由
? shackle vt. 束缚，阻挠，羁绊〔含贬义〕（用带有情感色彩的词，加强自己的立场）
Body 1
Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to advocate that guardians’ intervention is indispensable to some extent, since they are constitutionally responsible for their children’s growth. Smart parents understand that it cannot count solely on their kids, who, though indeed have the freedom, are too young to distinguish right from wrong, and that external conditions, adults’ advice and supervision, are needed. Therefore, mature adults, particularly parents, steps in and utilises their power. For instance, guardians may put a cap on what kind of video games teenagers play or what sorts of people adolescents make friends with in case those immature children get addicted to games containing too much violence or, even worse, sunk into gangs, which consequently render them off the right life track.
【解析】让步：从法律层面说，家长有责任防止孩子走上歧路，避免其受到不可逆的伤害，毕竟大多数孩子不够成熟，不能明辨是非。
? guardian n. [律]监护人
? intervention n. 干预（褒）
? constitutionally adv. 合乎宪法地
? count solely on 仅仅只依赖于
? distinguish right from wrong 明辨是非
? step in v. 介入
? put a cap on v. 限制
? off the right life track 偏离人生正轨
Body 2
However, apart from the aforementioned cases, too much interference on children’s making mistakes may incur repercussions running counter to adults’ expectation. More accurately, since most young children are to some degree rebellious, they are less likely to follow every piece of advice from adults, especially when the strict supervision develops into excessive control. Not surprisingly, this may fuel children’s grumble and push them to make mistakes instead. In fact, children should be allowed to learn from experiences. As long as young individuals are well-instructed, they are highly likely to learn from their mistakes about how to tell right from wrong, to take all factors into consideration before making decisions, and to reflect upon and correct themselves.
【解析】除去以上的极端情况，孩子应该有自由在一定条件下试错。从未成年人的特性出发，大多数孩子可能比较叛逆，一味地阻止可能适得其反。从试错中让孩子学会如何辨别是非，如何做决定前考虑周到，如何在犯错后及时弥补，远比家长直接介入更加令孩子印象深刻。
? interference n. 干涉（贬义）
? incur v. 导致（贬义）
? repercussion n. 后果（通常贬义）
? fuel vt. 加剧
? grumble n. 抱怨
? reflect upon oneself 反省
Conclusion
To recapitulate, children should overall learn to be responsible for their own decisions.
【解析】重申观点
? recapitulate v. 总结
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7月24雅思大作文示范写作：依赖or独立？
Some people think individuals are more and more dependent on each other. Others believe we are more and more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
范文及解析 Introduction
With the easier access to the internet, people who claim that they can well perform their
assignments, whether in work or in life, without the help of others only to find they may leave all the things in a mess. From my perspective, while we achieve independence in some ways, we are actually becoming more dependent on each other in others.
【解析】
社会类的老话题，在13年、16年分别出现过，这次又重现。出现了讨论关键词“dependent VS independent"是抽象名词，略微有点难度。双边观点互斥，可以站边讨论。
> only to find 结果却发现(表达出人意料或不愉快的意思)
Body Paragraph 1
Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to advocate the argument that citizens nowadays are becoming self-reliant. This is mainly because they seem to enjoy more freedom and fewer shackles, especially in finances. For instance,in the past, young school-leavers tended to secure a stable job and thus lean on the company to make ends meet, wives, "the angel in the house", used to be fully engaged in
domestic trivialities, being parasitic on their husbands financially, and the old always asked the young to take care of them. Things have changed. Graduates are allowed to start their own business from scratch based on the vigorous e-commerce, more women become breadwinners, leaving their husbands for babysitting, and the old,instead, freely choose to spend their late years in nursing homes. in this case, they are less dependent as they used to be.
【解析】
让步:财务经济角度出发，从三个维度进行今昔对比，举例论证现在的人，在经济上更为独立。
>secure vt.获得
>lean on v 依靠
> make ends meet 收支平衡:量入为出
> the angel in the house 文学意向，指代照顾家庭的贤妻良母
> domestic trivialities n. 家庭琐事
> be parasitic on 寄生于
> from scratch 白手起家
> breadwinner n.挣钱养家的人
Body Paragraph 2
However, the above argument is rather an incomplete part of the whole picture, which indicates that cooperation is the necessity in both people's work and their daily life. More accurately, since the division of labour has become more intensified,it is a commonplace that one may be a big fish in one domain but a small potato in another. In workplace,employees are more likely to work as a team, with everyone concentrating on his or her own module.In daily life, citizens, be they working professionals or entrepreneurs, husbands or wives, the old or the young.have to rely on others to address some
trivial things, from delivering food to fixing the plumbs. In this sense, everyone leans on others, with no one being an exception.
【解析】
从生活和工作两方面进行阐述劳动分工更加细化，导致人们在自己擅长的领域之外，不得不依赖其他职业的人。
> big fish n.大人物
>small potato n.无名小卒
Conclusion
To recapitulate while people seem to be financially independent to some extent collaboration. with others, both in employment and daily life, is inevitable.
【解析】重申观点
> recapitulate v.总结
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