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南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思

南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思，郑州新航道培训是一家专业的雅思培训机构，成立于1998年，总部位于北京。郑州新航道培训目前已在全国30多个城市设立了分支机构，拥有一支优秀的教师团队和完善的教学体系。　　湖州雅思培训，湖州雅思培训班，湖州学雅思哪家强，湖州新航道雅思培训励志语录：君子不以言举人，不以人废言。南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思。

郑州新航道培训提供全方位的雅思培训服务，包括雅思听说读写四项课程、雅思辅导课程、雅思模考和机经分析、雅思考试技巧指导等。郑州新航道培训还为学员提供个性化的学习计划和学习跟踪服务，确保每位学员都能够得到最优质的教学和服务。。

郑州新航道培训秉承“让每个学员都能考出理想的雅思成绩”的教学理念，致力于提升学员的英语水平和考试技能，帮助学员实现自己的留学和职业梦想。湖州学雅思，湖州专业雅思培训，湖州雅思单项培训，湖州雅思一对一，湖州新航道励志语：When all else is lost the future still remains.就是失去了一切别的，也还有未来。南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思。

南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思

为什么雅思写作分低?为什么学习了那么多技巧并无卵用?用了好多华丽辞藻仍是万年5.5?很有一种可能就是你的写作开头就让雅思考官看了就毫无阅读欲望、愤然扣分!今天就看看那些雅思写作中，考官看了想打人、想吐血的十种开头吧!备考雅思的同学们要注意了！

一、中式英语

讨厌指数：★★★★★

上榜理由：用中式英文开头，不仅会让考官看不懂，还暴露了你的语言功底，语料积累匮乏，是雅思写作中的大忌。

比如：

写作主题 1：The happiest moment in your life

案例：In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

写作主题 2：The population problem

案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

写作主题 3：Is there fairness in today’s business world?

案例：I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

雅思写作开头考官最不喜欢这些句子!

二、胡乱翻译中国俗语

讨厌指数：★★★★★

上榜理由：胡乱翻译中国俗语会起反作用，毕竟考官对中国俗语并不“感冒”，反而会引起考官反感。

比如：

写作主题 1：Is it good to have a large family?

案例：I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

写作主题 2：Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

案例：Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

写作主题 3：The advantage of being a nice person

案例：I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

三、超级啰嗦

讨厌指数：★★★★☆

上榜理由：开篇就要主题明了清晰，上来就啰啰嗦嗦表达不清，考官自然认为你的观点模糊，甚至不会表达。

比如：

写作主题 1：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

写作主题 2：Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

案例：Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

四、偏离主题

讨厌指数：★★★★☆

上榜理由：文不对题自然会扣分，给考官留下的印象就是跑题，想想整体写作分数还会高么?

比如：

写作主题：It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

五、观点不明朗

讨厌指数：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：雅思大作文很重要的一点就是你的逻辑性和观点，如果观点都不明确，后面的举例证明等都会缺乏说服力，自然分数也不会高。

比如：

写作主题：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

六、语法错误不断

讨厌指数：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：涉及到雅思写作评分标准中的语法多样性和准确性，语法错误不断自然会成为扣分点。

比如：

写作主题：If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

案例：About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.

七、意思重复

讨厌指数：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：反复重复一个意思，让考官会觉得你并没有什么可以表达的，或者词汇表达能力有限，自然也会扣分。

比如：

写作主题：Your opinion on DINK families

案例：My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

八、观点化

讨厌指数：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：考生在使用语言描述事物或者表达自己的观点时，应尽可能避免语言过于化，更应该注意该语言中非化表达方式的学习，这样才能尽显文章内容的客观性。

比如：

写作主题 1：The importance of confidence

案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

写作主题 2：The solution to the traffic problem

案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

九、内容过分简单

讨厌指数：★★☆☆☆

上榜理由：考官想给你打分都没有内容，所以切记尽量丰富内容，尤其不要照搬题目。

比如：

写作主题：The importance of environmental protection

案例：This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

十、用词不当

讨厌指数：★★☆☆☆

上榜理由：用词不当会暴露你的词汇，而且评分标准中谈到“在不同的语境中，使用正确的词性;”所以在使用词汇的时候，正确性也是非常重要的。如果想要取得更高的分数，那么词汇的多样性也要更多的纳入考虑。切记，不要用口语化的表达!

比如：

写作主题 1：The importance of confidence

案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

写作主题 2：The solution to the traffic problem

案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

总结

1.开头切记不要用中式英语表达，多积累地道的英语表达。

2.表达的观点要客观明确，切勿模棱两可化。

3.内容要清晰明了，切勿反复啰嗦，也不能一句话代之。

4.注意词性使用，减少语法错误，不要生搬硬套“华丽辞藻”。

总之，在备考雅思写作的时候还是要多多积累丰富的素材，学习地道的语言表达方式，一定要多动手写!!!不断地练习和修改，才能提升雅思写作能力。

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南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思

选择一家适合自己的雅思培训机构可以帮助你更快地提高雅思成绩，但是在众多的培训机构中选择一家合适的并不容易。以下是一些选择雅思培训机构的建议：湖州雅思培训，湖州雅思培训班，湖州学雅思哪家强，湖州新航道雅思培训励志语录：策马前途须努力，莫学龙钟虚叹息。。

1、教师团队：选择一家教师团队实力强、经验丰富、资质齐全的培训机构，这样可以保证你得到高质量的教学服务。

2、教学内容：了解培训机构的教学内容，以确保它们与你的学习目标相符合。不同的学生有不同的需求，所以选择适合自己的课程非常重要。

3、教学设施：考虑培训机构的教学设施是否完善，如教室大小、设备设施、学习环境等，这些因素会影响你的学习体验。

4、学员评价：查询培训机构的学员评价，可以了解到培训机构的教学质量和服务水平。可以通过线上社交平台或者口碑网站来了解学员的评价。

5、价格：不同的培训机构价格不同，选择合适的培训机构也要考虑自己的经济承受能力。

综上所述，选择适合自己的雅思培训机构需要综合考虑多方面因素，选择后需要认真学习并配合培训机构的教学计划，才能取得更好的学习效果。湖州学雅思，湖州专业雅思培训，湖州雅思单项培训，湖州雅思一对一，湖州新航道励志语：让我们将事前的忧虑，换为事前的思考和计划吧！南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思。

南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思

南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思雅思口语Part2＆3新话题：敬佩的商人

#Part2 话题

Describe a businessman you admire

You should say:

Who this person is

How you knew this person

What kinds of business this person does

And explain why you admire this person

#话题分析

《敬佩的商人》是9-12月口语换题季的新题，这道题整体难度不大，我们先来一步一步拆解开来。首先题目要求描述这个人是谁，大家在选择人物的时候还是要选择自己熟悉的人，选择对象可以是国内著名商人，也可以是国外的商人。

雅思口语Part2＆3新话题：敬佩的商人

其次就是“How you knew this person”这个问题，在这里特别要注意的是，题目中的“admire”一词是重点，他一定是你敬佩的商人。

Who this person is

第一小问这个人是谁，是一个人物类的常规问题，相信大家的回答经验很应该很丰富了，可以回答他是来自哪里，从事哪个方面的工作，在哪里生活等等。

How you knew this person

第二小问要求回答你是怎么知道这个人的，在这里大家可以根据你对这个人的初次印象和了解的经过进行描述，但也不要过多描述，因为第三、第四小问才是重点。

What kinds of business this person does

第三小问可以作为一个重点问题，要求描述这个商人是做什么的，大家可以说他成功经商的经验，相信成功者都不会一帆风顺，可以描述一些他失败的经验但是最后克服了。

And explain why you like or dislike it

最后一个问是主观类回答，要求回答的是喜欢/不喜欢这个人物的原因，但经过前面的铺垫，一般我们都会选择是喜欢。原因的描述，因为第三小问说了他的事业，那这里就可以说一部分他的个人品质，对社会的回报以及他对整个行业有什么积极作用等。

#范文

Today I’m going to tell you about a businessman that I really admire and respect. I live in a beautiful and peaceful street and most of my neighbors are working for companies or running their own enterprises. Among them, I would pick Mr. Vincent as the most admirable businessman I have ever met.

Mr. Vincent is 30 years old and he established his first company when he was only 26. His company trades medical equipment, and it’s name is Viet Sun. He has acquired a reputation as a profound and dedicated person to his work, I usually find him leaving for work early and getting home late. Even on weekends, instead of hanging out with friends, he is still glued to his computer screen.

Despite being older than me by nearly 10 years but he looks really young and is always full of energy. Few people have the great passion and relevant skills to pursue to their goals. Mr. Vincent is one of those who could achieve his dream by himself at the age of 26, and this is what I find most appealing about him.Another of his lovely traits is definitely his wise advice. Therefore, whenever I feel discouraged, I will seek his advice. I have learnt many useful things from him, not only in everyday things, but also in attitudes to life.

To me, he is not just a normal businessman, but a person whom I can share things with and learn many things from. I really owe a lot of gratitude to him.

P3 敬佩的商人

     # What do you think is the retirement age for men and women?

In our country people generally retire at the age of 60 but nowadays the trend is changing and people are thinking about retiring early.They want to work hard when they are young and earn more money so that they can retire by the age of 50 and fulfill their dreams such as traveling the world.

      # What kinds of qualities do people need to run their own business?

Essential business skills. Financial management. Being able to effectively manage your finances is critical. Marketing, sales and customer service. ..Communication and negotiation. .Leadership. Project management and planning. Delegation and time management. Problem solving.

     # What do you think are the key factors that con- tribute to the success of a business?

The 8 Factors of Business Success: A Plan. Having a plan is the first necessity for success. ...Perseverance. ... Understanding that success or failure is not permanent. ...

Shared belief and a team spirit. ..Motivation. ..Clear vision of what success is. ...Maximise resources available. ..Clear understanding of time, money and resources.

     # lf you had the opportunity to have your own business, what business would it be?Why?

I think this is a very interesting question,if given a chance;I will like to do something in the education sector probably related to only because I feel there is a lot of opportunity in this field.Moreover the current institutes do not provide quality coaching to the students that’s why lot of students fail to clear the exam in single attempt.

      #关于“商人”的词汇积累

to run your own business：经营自己的企业

Make great contributions ：做出巨大贡献

Be well-known for ：以..而闻名

to draw up a business plan ：起草一份商业计划书

Seek common ground while reserving differences ：求同存异

be extremely cruel and merciless ：心狠手辣

to launch a product（to start selling and promoting a new product ）：发布产品（开始销售和推广新产品）

湖州学雅思，湖州专业雅思培训，湖州雅思单项培训，湖州雅思一对一，湖州新航道励志语：志不立，天下无可成之事。南浔封闭培训学校雅思,湖州学雅思。